Ok friends - you're SO CLOSE! I recommend disabling your resource packs when you write the directional signs, as there are still words that are cut off (see pictures below):
You also have a few areas close to the walls and in town that are not well lit (see more pictures below - a yellow X marks a spot where mobs can spawn in the dark):
Lastly, you should put some directional signs near the gates to make it easier for players to find what they're looking for:
Please also remember that being added to the NBZ is for lighting, NOT for building. Once everything is lit you will be removed from the NBZ and unable to alter your builds in any way. I recommend moving your builds outside of the NBZ (or into town even!) to avoid this issue.
You can apply for a review again on 18th August 2023