Lore writing competition

[SergeantEagle]

yep its simple. The topic is to write the lore/backstory of the witch in Minecraft. If you win, you won't win anything, but I'd like to see everyone's ideas. Do not copy anyone's work! The winning backstory will be won by possibility, evidence, and writing skills, and a couple other factors. Post in this forum thread to submit a story! I will pick the winner by 4/1/21.

[REDRATH]

Hey I'll enter. I'll post my writing tomorrow after I write it.

[SergeantEagle]

ty ur the first to do this

[REDRATH]

he is my witch lore / background.

once there was a women.
she taught in the local village but one year she decided to go exploring for a year or so.
when she came back she wasn't the same.
she was wearing different clothes and she taught differently.
she often muttered under her breath random words. and at night there was lights and bangs coming from her house.
she taught kids in a dark way.
she laughed at pain and and bodies mysteriously disappeared from the cemetery.
then the villages people voted on her banishment and it was unanimous.
so she was banished to the soggy swamps of the south.
some how there became more like her until there were so many they forged the name witch.
now they plague this world.
you can see them on the adventures in the plains and in there moldy homes in the swamps.
in the village no one new were she went on her journey.
some say she went to the jungle and met a strange type of creature while others say she went underground and came across some kind of beast.
though many say she went to another dimension which is full of witches' even less human then the ones on this world.
but no one will ever know were she went.
though who really knows what happened for this story as been changed upon many a retelling and it could be she was just born a witch but no one knows and know on will ever know except for maybe witches'.

[SergeantEagle]

7/10
This is a good oversimplified story and i like how u did manage to say "Banishment to the soggy swamps of the south." The adjectives are great, and it connects why the witch lives in those areas.
However, there are a few errors I believe. One of them is the cemetery. In Minecraft, there are no cemeteries, and when a Minecraft mob dies, it disappears immediately, so there are no corpses of villagers.
You've done a good job, and I really like how the adjectives go together, and the story of the witch too, besides the cemetary.

[REDRATH]

Ok thx. I think I did let my imagination carry me a little bit.