I don't know if this one has already been done or not...
The back sleeve needs to be more puffy like the front one and not a diagonal line.
The hand on the top of the picture needs to be just the fingers and not looking like it folds at the wrist.
The shading on the face needs to contour with the sunken eye and raised cheek than being from the starter head circle.
Pick a line for the shirt to fall and not wavy all the way down the middle.
Other than that it's not too bad.
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all I can say for this drawing is, make the arms a tad thicker.
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