Art Critique

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bahamabucks
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Art Critique

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Here you can post you sketches / lineart / finished drawing and have it critiqued! :D traditinal and digital and any form of art is welcome <3




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OKAY FOLKS, I KNOW THE HANDS ARE TO SMALL BUT CRITIQUE AS HARD AS YALL WANT XD
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I don't know if this one has already been done or not...
The back sleeve needs to be more puffy like the front one and not a diagonal line.
The hand on the top of the picture needs to be just the fingers and not looking like it folds at the wrist.
The shading on the face needs to contour with the sunken eye and raised cheek than being from the starter head circle.
Pick a line for the shirt to fall and not wavy all the way down the middle.
Other than that it's not too bad.
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this is mine :) what do y'all think ?

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:shock: ally how do you shade like that????
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MCG8 wrote: Tue Sep 01, 2020 3:57 pm :shock: ally how do you shade like that????
idk i just can
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all I can say for this drawing is, make the arms a tad thicker.
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Awesome pics Ally. You're really good at it. Keep up the good work.
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pls critique this mushroom
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MCG8 wrote: Tue Sep 01, 2020 7:22 pm all I can say for this drawing is, make the arms a tad thicker.
Oki doki
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